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Disregard Education
Lauren,
Skip college. Become Pokemon Master.
Literature
Afforest
The last darkness will fall like autumn leaves
(wandering)
Dusky ground covered with many coloured twilights
(do you see all the lovely greys?)
Underneath which ghosten happiness lays buried
(spring was too far away. Alas)
The last darkness is falling like autumn leaves
(wondering)
Dusky ground covered with beaten light's corpse
(do you see all the dimmed colours?)
Underneath which darkened May Day lays buried
(spring is too far away. Alas)
The last darkness has fallen like autumn leaves
(withering)
Dusky ground covered with still-frozen time
(do you see all the solemn blacks?)
Underneath which doomed Freya lays buried
(spring will be to fa
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Gypsy
Perhaps she'll drop out of college, use all her bank account money and take a train to New York. Or maybe Seattle, for she likes all the cafes, the art, the vintage. Perhaps she'll return to California and live with friends and tell her parents that she's still at university.
Yeah, that could work. That's one way to disappear.
Maybe she'll meet a rich, married man that will take care of her as long as she's good with her tongue and her curves. He could take her to San Francisco where being strange is the norm, and she could find home in old houses smashed together for equity's sake.
She'll grow fond of small towns with simple heroes an
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I love everything about this piece....from the title....to the description! I completely agree. Writing with power and brevity is not an easy thing. You nailed this in every way! Did you experiment with structure at all? I'm not saying it needs any gimmick...I was just curious if when you first wrote the poem you did any of this:
Hate
does not
grow
Love
I'm going to FAV this for sure
Hate
does not
grow
Love
I'm going to FAV this for sure